jasmine 100wc week18
January 27, 2012
It was jacks birthday and he was going to Paris .He was that exited that he jumped up and down .On Saturday he drove to the airport ,in a silver car .When they got to Paris the first thing the saw was a tiny lady bug scurry across the sandy,stony floor. Jack gave his parents a hug and thanked them for taking him to Paris for his 11th birthday . They went up the Eiffel tower and saw all the people of course looked like tiny ants from were they where. After they had lunch they had snails and a French stick (French bread ).
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Well done Jasmine! fantastic 100 WC!do more.
wowzers jasmine.great imaginative peice of writing.i loved the words you used like scurry.you have also spelt Eiffel right that is amazing.well done.please write the rest of the story and bring it into school.i wish you were an author so i could buy every single book you make.well done!
it was supposed to be me who wrote this. i forgot to change the name. sorry
Wow Jasmine. I really like it when you put scurry across sandy stony path. Great discription wowzers.
great imaginative writing jasmine.it was great.it was alot better than mine.well done!!!
Exellent Jasmine it was a great story.
I like some of the words you have used like ‘scurry’! Did they all eat the snails??
Well done Jasmine! A fantastic 100WC! Please the rest of this story and bring it into school.
Sorry Jasmine I meant to put Please write the rest of this story and bring it into school