Jenny’s 100WC Week 20
February 9, 2012
Mum had a special cake. Suddenly the cake was gone. Mum asked” Did you eat all the cake.”
“It wasn’t my fault” I was determined to find who had eaten the cake. I thought it was Tom my friend or Sophia but I’m sure it might have been my brother. Soon I started to investigate. I noticed a piece of material stuck to the icing. This must have been off their school uniforms. I looked down the microscope if I could match the mystery material to one of the fabrics on their uniforms. I soon noticed it was my brother.
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Hi Jenny
Well done with your story – just be careful with some of your speech marks – they aren’t in the right place but other than that it’s a really good story.
Keep writing!
Hannah
I’m glad you like doing the 100WC each week. It is a challenge to use just 100 words isn’t is! Well done!
well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it
this is by charlotte
Thank you!
I loved writing this week’s 100WC. Even though it was very difficult.