Ella’s 100wc week 21
February 23, 2012
Today it was John’s birthday and it was leap year.He was eight this year.John totally forgot so he could actually be two this year.When he saw his birthday cake he was startled and shocked aswell. When his mum told him it was leap year he said “Oh dear I forgot it was leap year.”His mum was very suprised about that.Do you want me to tell you what the cake was?On it were the leap year.Then John realised.After his birthday party John and his family started to have a family meal toghether.
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I loved writing this story.
i will write the rest of the story.
I was supossed to put:on iit were the words leap year.
I was’nt supossed to put 2 i’s in it.
Hello Ella, your story is interesting. I like the smart way you included the prompt. Nice description especially with the way you used …startled and shocked as well… Well done!
Well done Ella. Would you have like to have been born on 29th Feb? I’m pleased to see that you have got all the capital letters in the right places, just like you do when you write in class!
I would not want to be born on the 29th of february.
thankyou mr harris